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Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by The Wandering Critic, Critic 04/24/2003, 1:50am PDT
The Wandering Critic wrote:

Funny but ......

What is that? Is that an ellipsis? Can it be any longer or queer? What's the deal with the Dancing Raisins? Are they supposed to make me want to eat raisins? (secret hint: I will be referring to this later)

The Wandering Critic wrote:

Needs work, your sentences seem to be running all over the place.
let's investigate YOUR sentence structure.

The Wandering Critic wrote:

Funny but ...... Needs work, your sentences seem to be running all over the place.
Well that is ass, isn't it?

Perhaps I have it wrong and it's:
The Wandering Critic wrote:

Funny but ......
Shit one...
The Wandering Critic wrote:

Needs work, your sentences seem to be running all over the place.
and shit two. Teach by example because trust me, we are all laughing at you.

The Wandering Critic wrote:

Also, could it be longer?
Of course it could, CP could cut and paste recipes for Tiger Wood's Cajun Creme Brulee, but how would that make it a better review?
What exactly do you think he neglected? Would that be too much like The Wandering CONSTRUCTIVE Critic.
Maybe then you are telling a joke with Jerry Seinfeldesque sarcasm? Do you remember how bad the raisin joke was? That was Jerry Seinfeld's and it sucked. Make that lesson your own.

The Wandering Critic wrote:

or are you going for Fusbett's style?
Other then being snotty and Canadian what exactly do the CreativePig and Fussbett styles share? By "Fusssbett's style," do you mean hilarious? I bet he was going for just that!
Are you referring to this? See around these parts we appreciate links to vague references.


Try harder.
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Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by creativepig 04/23/2003, 11:14pm PDT NEW
    Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by The Wandering Critic 04/23/2003, 11:50pm PDT NEW
        Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by The Wandering Critic, Critic 04/24/2003, 1:50am PDT NEW
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        This is a bad post, by the way. NT by Cyril Badman 06/24/2024, 12:33pm PDT NEW
    Very nice. Needs pictures. by Fussbett 04/24/2003, 2:48am PDT NEW
        Re: Very nice. Needs pictures. by foogla 04/24/2003, 8:12am PDT NEW
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                Re: Selected area turns red. Better now? by ydrt 04/24/2003, 11:00am PDT NEW
        Holy cow by I need clarification 04/26/2003, 12:22am PDT NEW
    Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by Ray, of Light 04/24/2003, 7:51pm PDT NEW
        Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by Fussbett 04/29/2003, 4:12am PDT NEW
            Oh--yeah, it's cool; also this: by creativepig 04/29/2003, 11:22am PDT NEW
                er by creativepig 04/29/2003, 11:23am PDT NEW
    Re: Author admits elsewhere to playing Links, now reviews. by Arnie 04/25/2003, 2:38am PDT NEW
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            Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by Chairman Mao 04/25/2003, 11:56am PDT NEW
                Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by Ray, of Light 04/25/2003, 9:23pm PDT NEW
                    Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by Chairman Mao 04/25/2003, 10:05pm PDT NEW
                        Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by FOF 04/26/2003, 3:43am PDT NEW
                            Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by FOF 04/26/2003, 3:47am PDT NEW
                        Re: SARS: The 13th Province?! by Ray, of Light 04/26/2003, 12:46pm PDT NEW
                    Sobering shit by Mr. Horrible 04/26/2003, 5:14am PDT NEW
                        Re: Sobering shit by Fussbett 04/26/2003, 4:37pm PDT NEW
            Canada: soon to have a whole lot less provinces in any case. by Senor Barborito 04/25/2003, 9:54pm PDT NEW
                Does that mean we'll go down to 14 provinces? NT by Fussbett 04/25/2003, 11:09pm PDT NEW
                    you already have 60, won 50 when some Faggot won a golf game no one here watched NT by (Hi! we're the ones at war!) 04/26/2003, 12:38am PDT NEW
                        Don't get all fancy with your correct math. by Fussbett 04/26/2003, 4:45pm PDT NEW
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