Senor Barborito wrote:

Bill Dungsroman wrote:

Inspired by indifference,
Motivated by transgression,
Marking time by casual experience,
Catalogued by forced repression.

Finding odd strength in weakness,
Scratching stones of another old wall,
Traversing a landscape of mutable bleakness,
Blinking the eye of a horror-squall.

Travelling among this shiftless substance,
Sailing a wind borne of wasted breath,
Destinations deliberate happenstance,
A circumvential journey beginning at death.

-BDR

You seem to be missing a syllable for the last line in the second stanza, no?

Was thinking "Blinking in the eye of a horror-squall" or "Blinking the eye inside a horror-squall" might work, but maybe I'm getting the beat down wrong.

Don't mean to be an ass I just mentally slipped on that line when reading it.

Very good, otherwise (and I may be wrong about the above) - nicely original word-combos.

--SB