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| Adverbs are the weakest form of writing, yes by Hemmingway, motherfucker 07/01/2012, 1:46pm PDT | ||||
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Don't use two words to tell me how some generic verb is being performed, use one specific verb to immediately get me the picture!
Gabe quickly turned around, and slowly took in the image Tycho's mouth being forcibly penetrated by tentacle horrors. The greatest terror, those tentacles were cruelly preventing WORDS from steadily coming out his mouth. Should become Gabe whirled around, only to gape at the image of Tycho's mouth being violated by tentacle horrors. The greatest terror, those tentacles were denying WORDS from dribbling out his mouth. Motherfucker! |
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Shitty episodic game get canceled? Turn it into fanfic! by 02/19/2011, 3:34pm PST  Did it get cancelled? That is delicious news. by 02/19/2011, 6:30pm PST Re: Did it get cancelled? That is delicious news. by 02/20/2011, 11:15pm PST The first game had meager profits, the second lost money, 3rd was cancelle NT by 02/22/2011, 5:17am PST The third one came out this week. It's now a 2D jRPG. NT by 07/01/2012, 7:56am PDT Not only did they fail at making games, they failed at their digital distributio by 02/24/2011, 4:19pm PST I liked those games, they were funny. The "fanfic" is unreadable. NT by 02/20/2011, 6:42am PST Shitty Writing 101: -ly Adjectives NT by 07/01/2012, 8:22am PDT Adverbs I mean, whoops NT by 07/01/2012, 8:23am PDT Adverbs are the weakest form of writing, yes by 07/01/2012, 1:46pm PDT |
