Forum Overview :: Mac Hall Complaints Department :: Adverbs are the weakest form of writing, yes

[quote name="Hemmingway, motherfucker"]Don't use two words to tell me <b>how</b> some generic verb is being performed, use one specific verb to immediately get me the picture! [quote]Gabe quickly turned around, and slowly took in the image Tycho's mouth being forcibly penetrated by tentacle horrors. The greatest terror, those tentacles were cruelly preventing WORDS from steadily coming out his mouth.[/quote] Should become [quote]Gabe whirled around, only to gape at the image of Tycho's mouth being violated by tentacle horrors. The greatest terror, those tentacles were denying WORDS from dribbling out his mouth.[/quote] Motherfucker![/quote]