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by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 10:46am PST |
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What village do you live in? wrote:
In the first paragraph, the comparisons are actually complete sentences in themselves (you know, with verbs and objects). Maybe a semicolon between the "Trespasser" and the "Thief" sentence. Or, use the conunction "and," as I suggested. Just a comma (as Worm had it) is too clunky. Your suggestion is fine, too; so is mine.
What village do you live in? wrote:
I mean, if you're going to "edit," then edit. I "did." Additionally, I'm sure you spent a long time trying to find an editing error on my part for your retarded little snipe, and the best you could come up with was an artistic variation? Fuck off back to nowhere, loser. |
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Halflife 2 REview (Screenshots coming once someone makes an Alex nude patch) by Worm 12/02/2004, 8:02pm PST 
Your review makes Pinback's almost bearable NT by Oiretsym 12/02/2004, 10:24pm PST 
Unreadable. by conflictNo 12/02/2004, 11:00pm PST 
Re: Unreadable. by Worm 12/03/2004, 12:51am PST 
Re: Unreadable. by Quentin Beck 09/25/2005, 4:19am PDT 
Re: Unreadable. by Worm 09/25/2005, 7:07am PDT 
Re: Unreadable. by Quentin Beck 06/04/2006, 7:42pm PDT 
Re: Unreadable. by alyx vance porn 06/16/2006, 8:16am PDT 
Edit. by Bill Dungsroman 12/02/2004, 11:26pm PST 
Why do I want a hyphen between kid and s? Got your funny macros mixed up? by Worm 12/03/2004, 12:47am PST 
Also by What village do you live in? 12/03/2004, 2:02am PST 
Re: Also by Worm 12/03/2004, 6:45am PST 
Re: Also by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 10:46am PST 
Oh good, another fag who's touchy about his "work." by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 10:50am PST 
QUESTION MARK. by Worm 12/03/2004, 11:52am PST 
Re: QUESTION MARK. by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 12:42pm PST 
Re: QUESTION MARK. by Worm 12/03/2004, 1:01pm PST 
Re: QUESTION MARK. by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 1:19pm PST 
It's the new mrs. johnson by Choson 12/03/2004, 4:45pm PST 
Scientific! by Choson 12/03/2004, 4:47pm PST 
Re: Oh good, another fag who's touchy about his "work." by Ice Cream Jonsey 12/03/2004, 11:54am PST 
Do I give off the "drying up tears" vibe constantly? by Worm 12/03/2004, 1:05pm PST 
Re: Oh good, another fag who's touchy about his "work." by I need clarification 12/04/2004, 11:54am PST 
Actually by Worm 12/04/2004, 12:50pm PST 
Everyone knows you were set up, fucking retard. by Mysterio 12/04/2004, 1:32pm PST 
Wait. by Worm 12/04/2004, 1:49pm PST 
Re: Wait. by Mysterio 12/04/2004, 2:10pm PST 
Re: Wait. by Worm 12/04/2004, 2:16pm PST 
Re: Wait. by Bill Dungsroman 12/04/2004, 2:20pm PST 
Stop saying "physics engine" so much plzthxbye NT by Mysterio 12/03/2004, 8:23am PST 
PS: the review sucks. by Mysterio 12/03/2004, 8:28am PST 
Snippy little shit by Mysterio 12/03/2004, 5:23pm PST 
ICJ, don't post this. It's terrible. Thanks. NT by I need clarification 12/03/2004, 6:35pm PST 
HONING MY CRAFT by Worm 12/03/2004, 9:56pm PST 
Re: HONING MY CRAFT by Mysterio 12/03/2004, 10:09pm PST 
Edit. by Bill Dungsroman 12/03/2004, 10:50pm PST 
I will take this under consideration. NT by Worm 12/03/2004, 10:52pm PST 
OK by Worm 12/03/2004, 11:34pm PST 
Re: OK by Bill Dungsroman 12/04/2004, 1:02pm PST 
Boomp NT by So it's not the second coming? 01/30/2006, 9:36pm PST 
Okay. Now what? NT by Worm 01/30/2006, 10:14pm PST 
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