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Re: CRUSH! CRUSH! by mrs. johnson 07/23/2003, 9:05pm PDT
Fullofkittens wrote:

he's in some atmospherically-induced tree ecstasy


That's a great line. Pure poetry. Anyway, yeah I guess that wasn't so hard. The story is mostly about this man's inability to reconcile his urges with his own sense of safety mixed into some suicidal tendencies. It's not about one specific thing, and I sort of can't think any dialogue that will clear it up. He doesn't anwer the questions because he either doesn't want to or because he is no condition to. But maybe if I told a story from a first person perspective it would let you get more familiar with the character. The problem then is, I have no excuse to go on rampages of flowery, but vague dialogue. Do I even need one?

the mrs.
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