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by nixon 05/01/2003, 5:33am PDT |
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This word "tourists," you use it quite often and I do not think you know what it means. You contradict yourself in the first two paragraphs and not in a clever way.
I know you think you are on to something with this, "I write all at once or not at all, and when i am done - i'm done," bullshit but nothing of value is ever built that way. Please take your motherfucking time, thanks.
The ending is a weak Hellboy echo.
It is rank with potential but otherwise just stinks.
Where the fuck is junior allen? |
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