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Re: Barbecued Armani (A working title) by nixon 05/01/2003, 5:33am PDT
This word "tourists," you use it quite often and I do not think you know what it means. You contradict yourself in the first two paragraphs and not in a clever way.

I know you think you are on to something with this, "I write all at once or not at all, and when i am done - i'm done," bullshit but nothing of value is ever built that way. Please take your motherfucking time, thanks.

The ending is a weak Hellboy echo.

It is rank with potential but otherwise just stinks.


Where the fuck is junior allen?
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Barbecued Armani (A working title) by mrs. johnson 05/01/2003, 1:04am PDT NEW
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        Re: Barbecued Armani (A working title) by mrs. johnson 05/01/2003, 1:47pm PDT NEW
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