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Re: Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by electro moss 01/10/2003, 1:02pm PST
Nirk Firkel wrote:

One problem is the formatting, the other problem is that I felt the whole time you must be making jokes I can't get.


You wake up into a cloud of nurses
Tight white stalking angels
Trimming your sheets and primly enforcing
A polite silence
Regarding the forbidden theme

My fingertip on your brow
Opens your eyes to see
My mask of perfect sadness and respect

And now it's time

I lean over to give you this last glimpse
Of what you can't have
And no longer even want

And I smile
And whisper in your ear:

Your life
Your whole life
Your entire life
Was a joke you couldn't get
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Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by mrs. johnson 01/10/2003, 5:44am PST NEW
    Comments by General Ataturk 01/10/2003, 5:56am PST NEW
    Re: Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by Nirk Firkel 01/10/2003, 12:17pm PST NEW
        Re: Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by electro moss 01/10/2003, 1:02pm PST NEW
            Re: Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by Nirk Firkel 01/10/2003, 1:15pm PST NEW
            EXEMPT NT by General Ataturk 01/10/2003, 2:21pm PST NEW
                Love Poem by electro moss 01/10/2003, 5:35pm PST NEW
                    Re: Love Poem/ EXEMPT by Emperor Zseni 01/10/2003, 6:31pm PST NEW
                        Re: Love Poem/ EXEMPT by electro moss 01/10/2003, 11:55pm PST NEW
                            Re: Love Poem/ EXEMPT by electro moss 01/11/2003, 12:26am PST NEW
                                Re: Love Poem/ EXEMPT by Senor Barborito 01/14/2003, 1:32am PST NEW
                                    Re: Love Poem/ EXEMPT by Senor Barborito 01/14/2003, 4:02am PST NEW
        Re: Seafood: My Exploration of Prose (long) by Bill Dungsroman 01/10/2003, 3:22pm PST NEW
    Should I repost it with better formatting? by mrs. johnson 01/10/2003, 4:06pm PST NEW
        Please God, no by junior allen 01/10/2003, 4:58pm PST NEW
            Re: Please God, no by mrs. johnson 01/10/2003, 6:31pm PST NEW
                I don't like it. (n/t) by junior allen 01/13/2003, 2:32pm PST NEW
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