Forum Overview :: Cabaret Voltron :: Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others)

[quote name="mrs. johnson"]That's very useful, thank you. I'm not quite sure how to work out the pacing issues or the difference between the two quasi-comical descriptions. Are you saying that the non-working ones are too stuffed full of useless words and outstay their welcome? I really should edit these before posting, but I always finish at 4 am, and then I fly into my bed. the mrs.[/quote]