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[quote name="Ray, of Light"][quote name="Fussbett"]My goal is to make it all-punchline, no ramble. SO ANYWAY, can you excercise your second-in-Chief powers and give it a twice over for spelling and grammar corrections?[/quote] Believe it or not, <i>that was my spelling and grammar review</i>.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;!!! On second glance, there are some little things: <i>As if excellent gameplay wasn't enough</i> I think "weren't" is the word to use. <i>apparantly</i> apparently. <i>Controlling the camera is of course a euphamism for "zooming in, popping a boner"</i> "Control the camera" is, of course, a euphemism for "zoom in, pop boner". (note spelling correction, even if you dislike the 4-syllables-leaner rewrite) <i>it's real purpose</i> its real purpose SPELLING / GRAMMAR CORRECTIONS END HERE. Ray![/quote]