Forum Overview :: Article Submissions :: Re: Attaq Iraq

[quote name="Entropy Stew"][quote name="Fussbett"]<a href="http://www.caltrops.com/review0013.html">A wild experiment in reviewing!</a> I played "editor" a little bit in my cutting of some inside jokes and other such forum-y aspects. I also wrote the little intro, which I guess the EiC might want to write instead. So I guess this is where we discuss it, and ultimately get the EiC to approve it. Let's not talk it to death, though, because we want it up while the war is still fresh. Freshness is also the reason why I left it as a disjointed roundtable discussion, and didn't waste time crafting it into a one-voice standard review. [/quote] Get rid of one of the "despite"s in the first two sentences. Add a colon after the "Anonymous" name. Spell "Xenosage" correctly. I disagree with Seni about attributing images in the caption, as it fucks up the look. Maybe just put a ALT="Caption by Stewtropy Ent" type thing in. Also please to be giving credit to FABIO for starting the whole thing. -/ES/- It's fucking beautiful in its current state, I doubt it needs any more editing[/quote]