Forum Overview :: Cabaret Voltron :: Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity

[quote name="I need clarification"]Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity You talkin' nonstop, you got more adjectives than sense You must be paid by the word Yo' goal should be a point, not a club Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity Why you got to spend so much time Talkin' bout yo'sef when talkin' 'bout others? Yo' goal should be to convince, not bore Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity You overworkin' my ears, hear? You know what you want to say, say it Yo' goal should be to impress, not depress Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity Take a short note from Ellroy, and Mamet I should remember the beginning of yo' sentence when I reach the end. Yo' goal should be epiphany, not cacophany. [/quote]